We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
• An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
• Reasons for our opinion,
• An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion, kids should have their very own computer. Kids would not have to share the computers and you would not have to wait for your older brother or sister. I think computers should cost less and parents could get computers. People would not have to wait for ever.
Tuesday, May 27, 2008
Monday, May 12, 2008
What Central Means to ME

I love playing football because it keeps you fit. It is fun and gets you going. You have to co-operate. I play with people like Jackson, Dylan, Troy and other kids from every single classroom, so it takes a long time to sort out the teams, but it’s worth it. We laugh when the ball goes out. I hope people keep playing football at our school.
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