Computer Kids

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
• An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
• Reasons for our opinion,
• An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion, kids should have their very own computer. Kids would not have to share the computers and you would not have to wait for your older brother or sister. I think computers should cost less and parents could get computers. People would not have to wait for ever.